Searria H.

Oh, Brie. I'm sorry. I wish I could help you, but I think you're doing yourself good to write about it. :) Now, please don't take anything I say as ...

Hello, Muffin! I love the mood you set with the Christmas party. :) You do a wonderful job of showing us how your MC feels at the party rather than ...

Because I don't know the background behind this poem, I'm sort of at a loss for words. This is obviously an emotional topic for you, and it has a halo ...

This one made me sad. I've got a much younger sister, so this sort of stuff kind of gets me for some reason. Again, your grammar was really good, save ...

Hey there, Brie! This is certainly random. ;) I liked it. Your characterization of the calm doctor, the worried nurse, and the crazy man fit together very nicely. :D I ...

Hi! I loved your whole fairy tale vibe with this. It just made me smile. :) I definitely agree with the previous two reviewers about the Big Mac. Maybe a ...

There was something really charming about this poem. It reminds me of a book I read in first grade about a girl who is supposed to draw a picture of ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! I like your user name. My cousins' cat is named Kit Kat. :D I think you have a good start here, but I agree with Amelia ...

I'm truly sorry for your loss. I know that isn't much for comfort. I really respect you for writing this so soon and sharing with us. I just have a ...

This was nice! I almost think you could take this and make it into a whole other short story. :D I'll start with praise. You have a really great idea ...

A very creative idea, despite you being "Creatively blind." ;) (That was also my favourite line). I don't know much about the structure of poetry, so if I correct some ...

My little sister is five. I know exactly what you mean about giving anything to play with her. I hardly ever have time. I couldn't imagine losing her, and I'm ...

Hello, Bunny dear! This was a very different piece for you but no less fantastic. :) Even though Alphonse has this supernatural ability, he seems very natural. By that I ...

Hey! First of all, if this is a true story, I'm deeply sorry for you. ;) This was extremely short. I would love to see more detail and descriptions. :D ...

Hi, Stori! I really enjoyed reading this, but I feel like there should be more to this story than you've given us. I kept looking to see if there was ...